留学文书范文（第1篇）

Dear xx,

　　Think about the decisions you have made that led to your current position.Past: What choices have you made that led to your current position present: whyis astern mba necessary at this point in your life? future: what is your desiredposition upon graduation from the Stern school I have always desired a careerthat requires innovation, educated risk, and foresight. I learned to respectthese qualities from my father, a Lebanese immigrant who worked for years tocreate his own business. Through his example, I have seen firsthand theadvantages and challenges of self-employment--the rewards to be gained and thetotal commitment required. My goal is to create a business based on my own ideasand efforts, and have made decisions aimed at bringing this dream into fruition.After graduating from college, I accepted a position as the manager of anestablished German restaurant in San Francisco. I had been the evening managerthere for nearly two years while attending college, and knew that the restaurantwas struggling. For several years, high overhead costs and poor marketing hadbrought revenue to a minimum. I saw the position as an intriguing challenge; Iknew I could dramatically increase the restaurant’ s profitability. Immediatelyafter accepting the position in July of 1995,I addressed the most significantproblem: high overhead from over staffing, food waste, and unnecessary purchasesof supplies. I lowered each of these expenses while maintaining the restaurant’s quality and efficiency. My next target was marketing. Inexpensiveadvertisement in local newspapers, attractive signage, and Internet postingsbrought in many new customers. In the meantime, I took control of theaccounting, eliminating the need for independent help. The increased revenue anddecreased spending had an immediate effect. At the end of 1996, the restaurantreported a profit for the first time in six years. I remained with the businessuntil it was sold in 1997, monitoring these changes in order to provide lastingimprovement. Although the position made me realize that the restaurant businessdid not appeal to me, those two years reaffirmed my desire to operate my ownbusiness. I had not abandoned my education during that time; while working atthe restaurant, I had taken real estate courses in the evening and passed theCalifornia State Broker exam in xx. My brother and I launched our own propertymanagement company in April of 1996,and it quickly grew. We currently have sevencommercial properties under management. Our responsibilities include leasing,accounting, and property maintenance. In 1997, I began working as a broker witha commercial real estate company, largely to gain the knowledge of retail toimprove the leasing and sales division of my company. I am currently employed ina sales position with a private business bank in San Francisco.

　　I was hired to bring business into the bank, which rarely advertises,prefer ring to attract business primarily from referrals. My responsibilitiesinclude interacting with potential clients, selling loans and deposits, andaccount maintenance. This job has given me better understanding of sales andfinance, which is crucial to the success of any business. Although my ultimategoal is to grow our property management company into a full time business, thesepositions in other industries have been invaluable learning aids. Propertymanagement requires an extensive knowledge of real estate, banking, accountingand sales. I now feel confident that I have gained valuable experience with mywork.

　　However, I know that earning a graduate degree will further enhance theskills I need to develop a viable company. The Leonard N. Stern School ofBusiness at New York University will allow me to learn from the finest teachers,interact with the brightest students, and experience one of the top graduateprograms in the United States. I can only anticipate the invaluable knowledgeand training I will gain from being a part of this program.

　　Although my work experience has been extremely important, the NYU SternSchool of Business will be equally as educational. It will allow me toincorporate my experiences with other equally ambitious students, and to broadenmy goals, ideas and perspectives. A graduate degree in Management andOrganizational Behavior is a significant asset to any business owner. The firstyear curriculum of accounting, management, finance, marketing, and economicswill enhance my knowledge of the basic foundations of business and management.During my second semester, I will enroll in the track courses of EntrepreneurialStudies. These classes will teach me advanced business techniques and theirsuccessful implementation. In addition, Stern-sponsored, non-academicentrepreneurial organizations will be both educational and enjoyable. I viewthese as an opportunity to meet students who share similar goals. They willexpand my awareness of new business concepts within our quickly evolvingeconomy--which I hope to incorporate into my own company. The experiencesavailable at NYU are myriad, and a degree from the Stern School will propel metoward the realization of my professional goals.

　　Yours sincerely,

留学文书范文（第2篇）

　　美国留学奖学金分成很多种，有全额和部分两种，还有各类助学金、补助金等，此外，还可申请宿舍助理、研究生助理等，但是这类奖学金基本上要熟悉校园环境以后才能申请到。目前提供奖学金的单位，除了学校外，还有政府部门和私人机构，包括众多的基金会和专业机构，甚至还有个人提供者。

　　知己知彼是申请奖学金的前提条件。一个成功的申请者首先要了解自己的优势，从而选择最合适的学校。通常申请人应同时申请几所不同层次的学校，并要根据自身的实力，再有重点地申请其中的两三所。

　　通常来说，影响获得奖学金的因素有以下几点：学习成绩、标准化考试成绩、工作经验、学术背景和所获荣誉奖项、良好的家庭背景。申请者要充分衡量自己各个条件的优劣，做出适合自己的奖学金申请计划。

　　留学专家提醒：申请文书至关重要

　　留学文书在西方的文化背景下是申请入学奖学金的极为重要的组成部分。其中个人陈述(Personal Statement，简称PS)往往对申请是否成功起到很大的作用。

　　留学专家提醒广大申请者，随着奖学金申请人数的增加，奖学金增多并不意味着申请人都可以轻易获得，不主动申请，奖学金很少会自己找上门来。

　　要想获得成功，努力提升自己的专业背景，细心把握好申请中的每一个环节尤为重要。

　　总体来讲，充分的准备可以体现在：全面了解美国大学的录取人数和奖学金发放比例;在文书写作中有效地挖掘升华自己的优势，在现有基础上加强竞争力;与教授及导师保持积极到位的沟通，让自己在数以千计的申请者中脱颖而出。

　　个人陈述(PS) 写作技巧

　　1.合适长度为600~800个英文单词。

　　2.必须紧扣所要申请的那个专业来写，主线要明确，不要盲目地个性化。让招生者知道你选择该专业的明确和强烈的动机，同时具备充分的条件完成该专业的学习。

　　3.结构简单，衔接紧密，主线明确，便于理解。

　　4.许多申请人将简历放在PS中，这会弱化了PS应起的作用。

　　5.语言表达一定要用地道的英语

　　留学专家分析说，文书在申请过程中起着极为关键的作用，申奖尤甚。尤其对于两个标准化成绩相近的学生，就完全要靠文书博弈了。

　　文书不应大而全，要结合申请专业，要选择自己个性突出的地方为着眼点，说明为什么我的这样的行为或者思想会符合美国高校的办学理念，讲清楚自己是怎样一个你们会需要的学生，还要告诉人家我的加入能给学校的Diversity带来什么样的丰富与改变。但需要注意的是，在申请美国留学奖学金的过程中文书不是万能的，起到的是锦上添花的功效，如果标准化成绩不够，文书也就起不到它应有的作用了。

　　20xx年申请奖学金的五大要素

　　1. 参加必要的标准化考试，并取得优秀的语言和考试成绩

　　优秀的标准化考试成绩是申请美国大学奖学金必不可少的因素。美国大学在评定申请人奖学金资助时，会要求申请人提供一种或几种标准考试的成绩。美国目前在中国举行并认同的标准考试有：TOEFL/IELTS、SAT、GRE、GMAT、LSAT和TSE。

　　美国留学专家建议：参加标准化考试的时间越早越好，TOEFL有效期为2年，最好达到106分以上。SAT的有效期为2年，申请学校的名次与成绩成正比，例如TOP20的学校，成绩最好达到或不低于2200。GRE、GMAT、LSAT的有效期均为5年。但要注意的是GRE、GMAT、与LSAT要力争一炮打响，因为这些考试都有历史记录，ETS寄送成绩时会把所有考出的成绩一并寄到学校去，而学校往往会采取参看每次成绩的平均分数，而非最高分数作为考虑标准。相反，TOEFL和SAT考试，只寄送最近或最好的一次考试成绩即可，成绩不理想可以多次参加考试直到考出理想成绩为止。

　　2. 给力的GPA成绩或平均分

　　无论是申请本科还是硕士的学生，要想获得奖学金，GPA的成绩也是重中之重，学校非常看重，因此，如果您想成功申请到美国名校，并且向获得丰厚的奖学金，美国留学专家建议：最好从高一或大一开始，不要偏科，保证每一门会出现在成绩单上的科目成绩都不低于80分或保证GPA3.0以上。当然有的专业难度系数比较高，很难达到这个标准，但考生仍然要尽力而为。

留学文书范文（第3篇）

　　一、美国留学文书介绍

　　1.个人陈述（PS）

　　个人陈述可以包括为什么选择这个专业，你的专业背景，有过什么成就，现在有什么想法，如果获得了该专业的学位后对未来有什么打算等等这是带有主观意向的表达。

　　2.个人简历（CV）

　　简历是对客观事实的陈述，展示个人信息、教育背景、所获荣誉、发表的著作、工作实习经历以及在工作过程中为公司做出的贡献等等。简历要简短，最好不要超过两页。

　　3.essay短文

　　Essay短文就是一篇命题作文，但又跟我们平常写的作文不一样，要记住ESSAY短文的最终目的是体现申请者鲜明的个人特色，要写出具有独特性的Essay，不要随大流千篇一律，那样不会给招生官留下任何印象。

　　4.专业写作范例（WS）

　　WS是文科生申请美国留学才需要提交的材料，，绝大部分文科专业都需要WS ，其他专业一般不需要，WS是文科申请文书中的重中之重，因为WS可以直接体现申请者的论文写作能力。

　　5.推荐信

　　至少三封，而且需要有一封来自你的英语老师，写推荐信的推荐人非常重要，最好是有些名气的，但也不强求，但是切记一定是对申请人了解的推荐人才可以。推荐信需要从你的基本情况、学术论文、科研成果、获得奖励、所具备的能力等方面具体评价，不能泛泛而谈。

　　二、怎么写

　　1.头脑风暴

　　万事开头难，在下笔之前对文书的整体构思是最难的。

　　不妨先在脑海中将自己的个人特点和优势进行一波头脑风暴吧，深入地分析下自己发掘自己的闪光点。

　　2.列大纲写初稿

　　当你把自己所有的特点或者想写的点确定好之后，就可以开始列大纲写初稿了。

　　初稿不需要完美，只需要将所有的点表达出来就好，换句话说，就是不管多烂，先写一稿出来。

　　3.丰富essay的三大块

　　文书通常分为开头、正文、总结三部分。开头一段引入自己的主题，正文结合事例表述观点，最后一段总结。

　　4.试着让自己的文书具体化

　　这里的具体化指的是在描述自己的个性特征是采取的事例一定要真实而具体。

　　5. 切入点要独特

　　比如，可以用有趣的故事或者跟学校相关的历史或趣味来切入自己为何适合这所学校。

　　6.essay要真实

　　无论essay的题目是问你的优点、特长、影响你的经历还是为什么要选择这所学校，回答的时候都要保证真诚。

　　7.修改

　　essay写完之后就是无尽的修改了，同学、朋友、家长、老师等等都可以帮你修改.

　　除了语法和书写错误之外，重点是问问他们看到文书的感受，是否能够真实表达自己的心声。

　　三、文书误区

　　1.随大流、没有个人特色

　　因为中国的教育模式本来就单一，你以为自己艺术、体育、学习各方面都很优秀，但写出来仍避免不了大众化、千篇一律。好的表达方法能在一定程度上弥补这种不足。同一件事、同一个成长历程，从不同的角度看就可能会产生不同的效果。“横看成岭侧成峰”，跳出事件的本身，反而更加容易看出这件事情深层次的意义。学校要了解的正是你和你的个性，而不是某个事件或经历，所以千万不要用整篇文章来讨论自己的成就。

　　另外，除了强调大学校园所能提供给学生良好的学习环境外，千万不要忽略了自己能对申请的大学做出哪些贡献，这才是你区别于别人的特色所在。

　　2.奇怪的创意写作，“个性化”歪曲

　　有学生认为申请文书要展现特殊的写作技巧，为了脱颖而出，他们选择把奇思妙想写进文章，或写得诗情画意，或采用新颖的文体来写，或在文书的开头搞特殊，或使用第三人称来写，或在文中大量运用对话式写法……以期用另类来吸引眼球。这些都是错误的，不但无法为自己的申请加分，而且很有可能犯了审核官员的大忌，严重影响自己的申请结果。

　　记住，申请文书不是秀写作技巧的作文比赛，而是让招生官员了解你是怎样的一个人。独特的自己是通过真实的成长经历展现出来的，而不是形式化的表演。

　　3.罗列奖项，吹嘘自己

　　从中国人的角度出发，认为“有奖就是才”，于是很多学生习惯在申请文书中罗列奖项，大奖小奖全不放过。看似成就一大堆，却易给人造成一种虚假浮夸的印象。事实上，中国的各种竞赛实在太多，中国申请者中得奖的人多如牛毛，国外大学又不了解中国的各种比赛的权威性，况且学校多已表明，审核的标准不是以得奖的多少来定论。所以，没有必要在文章中对所有奖项进行机械的罗列。

留学文书范文（第4篇）

　　1、简历

　　在申请过程中，履历表是至关重要的材料，是录取委员会对申请人的第一印象，因此，学生应善于利用履历表来展示自己的长处。无论是财务，会计，会计还是业务分析，招生委员会都会在审查材料的过程中从以下几个方面评估申请人的能力：教育背景，学术和学术表现，实习经验和综合素质。商学院的申请，大多数申请人提交一页一页的简历，篇幅有限，学生需要使用有限的篇幅来展示内容的实质。因此，简历写作应据大学四年，与应用专业紧密相关，内容选择多样化，重复经历等方面可根据权重进行选择。简历的目的不仅是要脱颖而出，而且还要打动招生委员会。

　　2、推荐信

　　商学院毕业生申请者最多可提交三封推荐信，两份学术推荐信以及一份实习或工作推荐。学生需要充分利用三个推荐信，并注意推荐信的内容不应完全重复，即两个学术推荐信应提及学习能力和组织沟通能力。推荐信应充分体现个人自身的综合素质，学业成绩，知识运用和整合能力，以充分发挥推荐信的作用。同时，推荐信不应太长，单词大约为300字，不超过400字。

　　3、个人陈述

　　实际的实践经验可以帮助学生开阔眼界，发现自己的缺点以及行业发展的优缺点，从而激发他们对行业的认真思考。这种见识最有可能给招生委员会留下深刻印象，并将帮助他们将他们的需求与计划更紧密地联系起来。

　　在个人陈述中，申请人的背景描述至关重要。但是，有必要将其与简历的标题区分开。除了平铺，我们还可以添加描述性的情感用语，使文章更加生动。当然，这些支持要素应与职业规划紧密相关。

　　很多时候，求职者觉得我可以写下自己的职业计划，毕竟学校已经表明，毕业后你不会被迫遵循这个职业计划。不过，在你的个人陈述中，请认真考虑您的未来职业。结合自己的经验并与大学的培训方向保持一致，这样的职业规划可以使招生委员会感受到所有人的热情。

　　背景的多样性。美国商学院专注于学生背景的多样性。因此，在个人陈述和论文中，学生可以首先选择他们在不同文化背景下的学习或工作经验。这样的经验可以更好地显示申请人的个人能力。

留学文书范文（第5篇）

　　在本科新生高端申请中，很多申请者会选择Common Application中Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you， and describe that influence 这个Essay来回答。而最常见的对自己影响深刻的人就是父母。比如写父母是如何的伟大，白手起家才挣得今天的家业，或者父母曾经带自己去哪些国家旅行，或者父母为了培养自己的某项特长做了很大牺牲等等。

　　不得不承认，在培养孩子方面，几乎每对父母都是花了很多的心思。他们在介绍自己孩子成长往事时自豪的神情，曾经无数次打动过我。而孩子们的回答也多次加强了我对父母无私辛苦付出的敬佩。

　　但是从留学专家的角度来看，这样的故事几乎会出现在每一个申请者的回答中，让人不免觉得乏味和雷同。想来美国名校的AO们也一定会有同感吧？而且更不理想的是，这样的选材其实没有正确的回答问题，更没有给AO们想要了解的信息。

　　所以，在动笔之前，请再仔细看一下这个题目：

　　Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you， and describe that influence

　　不难看出，题目其实是分两部分的，一是讲一下谁是对你影响最大的人，二是讲讲有什么影响。如果你只是一直写这个对你影响的人都做了什么，那末这个回答是不完整的而且也不符合AO们想了解的内容。因为申请美国学校的人是你，希望被录取的人是你，AO们想要了解的也是你。所以任何关于这个题目的回答都应当突出这个人改变了你什么，之后你又做了什么。

　　W同学的素材相对新颖一些：讲的是长笛老师如何鼓励他克服重重困难坚持练好长笛，最终他成为了乐队首席长笛并获得了很多奖项的故事。不难看出，W给自己设计的形象是传统的战胜自我，超越自我的路线。这个故事貌似是很符合题目的要求，有写到影响我的人--老师，也有写到我后来的表现与成绩。但是经验告诉我，面前的W同学还能有更精彩的故事。

　　目前的这个故事相对平淡，因为有特长的孩子很多，介绍自己克服困难最终取得傲人成绩的故事也是屡见不鲜。所以，我决定帮他做到更精彩。通过看他的简历和跟他交谈之后，我注意到，他得到的长笛方面的奖比较多，而且经常去某儿童村参加公益性的演出。这个细节让我感觉到他的爱心。于是，我产生了一个对W的新定位：一个有爱心的长笛演奏高手。

　　我们的故事从一次失败的长笛比赛经历说起。和很多孩子一样，学习艺术特长，参加各种比赛，拿各种奖是W一开始学习长笛的目标。W最崇拜的是他的老师，因为老师获奖无数，永远是舞台上的焦点。然而，在一次重要比赛上的失利让W感觉到了失败的痛苦。本以为老师会责备他，但是老师却邀请他周六一起去参加在某儿童村的一次特别的演出。没有鲜花，没有掌声，没有华丽的舞台也没有三角钢琴的伴奏，这样一次在食堂举办的简陋的演出却让W同学重新认识了他的老师。老师告诉W，他经常会来这里给孩子们演奏。因为音乐的真谛不是高超的技巧和获更多的奖，而是给喜欢音乐人的带去快乐。老师的话和那次演出经历改变了W同学的目标和对音乐的看法。从那之后，他也加入到了公益演出的队伍中，并在其中找到了自己新的价值。

　　这个故事我和W都很满意，更让我们高兴的是，AO在给录取信中也特意提到了对这个Essay的喜爱。其实，表示，每一个本科申请者都是特别的，只是他们可能没有意识到如何包装自己而已。在正确理解了题目之后，新颖的选材，精巧的构思和真诚的讲述就足够打动AO了。

留学文书范文（第6篇）

Dear x,

　　Finance is the lifeline of modern economy and if there is no financeglobalization, there is no economy globalization. Finance globalization promotedto enlarge international finance market; multinational trade species and thescale, to make finance innovative appeared, strengthen international capitalfunction and to play an important role on the resource distribution in theworld. With the communication among nations increase and the technologyinformation development, the development of finance tends to globalization.Finance globalization is the motor of economy globalization, finance and economywas one of the important factors for holding for the whole world, information,technology and other industry were developed on the base of finance andeconomy.

　　The economy strength of a nation decided its place in the world. In thefuture, the world finance market would present themselves with different styles;non-essential economy began to play an important role in the world, thedevelopment of information industry made finance market develop more quickly.Moreover, finance influenced largely on the daily life of common people and madecommon people more concern the development tendency of finance then before andmade out the relevant reaction according to getting information from allaspects, for example, the change of inflation, stock and exchange rate etc. Allthat influenced common peoples (people’s) lives and economical programs.

　　I began to realize that finance in fact was the different (difference)between microcosmic and microeconomic and macroeconomic knowledge through mylearning in the university, and it owned strong practice and was not abstractknowledge. For instance, currency banking, investment and international financeetc. all offered many cases and made me realize the meaning of finance. Then Iknew that finance covered a wider scope and researcher needed strong academicbackground and ability on macro-control by practices and analysis of cases. Forexample, I acted as a leader of group, each group represents an enterprise anddiscussed whether open new produces instead of old produces, I told every memberto answer for a part and consult materials, then we talked about them togetherand found some materials had superposition and didn’t have close logic, eveneach member had different emphasis and expressions which made me knowcooperation was very important in a enterprise. So I held the second meeting totalk about these questions. I asked all members to look for materials relevantto this case respectively and then analyzed them together. During the process,we thought about them deeply and fully, finally we got a best scheme.

　　Through this experiment, I became lover finance major than before, becauseit not only brought me model and data but also interest on (in) connectingknowledge with practices to make data and model vivid. Even each new ideaproduced different result. Finance is not a material concept but is socialscience, which contains a wider scope. I am very glad to involving discoveringunknown things in this field. Just like discussion, many members’ thoughtsinspired me and we got satisfied results. Finance is a social science whichembodied human being is the essential. We could cultivate our academic tasteduring the learning symposia and academic discussion process. In the practiceswe could cultivate intuition added combination with academic background andmathematic theory; we could understand finance better.

　　So I pay attention to connect theory and practices more than before, in myspare time I took part in social practices, for example I visited “internationalfinance” of newspaper office and “Shanghai stock exchange”, besides I took partin planning for the “second finance year meeting” in Shanghai University ofFinance and Economics. During the process, I met many finance people and got achance for visiting Holland bank. Moreover I often consulted lots of financejournals and website materials etc. In order to connect theory with practicesbetter, I carried on special researches on these problems.

　　For example, I began to research “RMB Globalization problem” and its aimwas to review substantial economy and non-substantial economy how to influencecurrency international globalization from demonstration and theory angle to helpus understand the experiences and lessons happened on the process of eachnational currency globalization and offered some feasible references for RMBinternational globalization. I connected the fact of our national economydevelopment, especially, the base fact of RMB used by some nations around China,through researching the general rule of currency internationalizationglobalization, to discuss the problem on RMB international globalizationprocess.

　　First, I reviewed the main countries’ currency globalization process in theworld, and found that currency globalization must have two basic conditions. Thefirst was rich economy strength; the second was to keep valuta longstabilization. Second, I pointed out RMB globalization was the necessity choiceof our national economy persisting development and the benefit of currencyglobalization according to the impersonality requirement of economicalglobalization development, and RMB globalization would more enlarge the degreefor opening to foreign.

　　At the same time I thought that stable, quickly developmental nationaleconomy and larger economical scope made RMB of our country globalizationstrengthens and higher ability against risk, the last part emphasized theprocess of RMB globalization and the research on keeping away from risk. Theprocess of RMB internationalization was: first implement RMB regional strategyon the basis of East Asia currency cooperation and East Asian free trade, thenimplement RMB globalization stratagem under many perfect factors influence.

　　But during this process, it was very difficult for me to researchnon-substantiality economy in China. At present familiar to us, it was the stockmarket, while in China the stock market system did not very perfect and existsome problems on efficiency, security and fair. For example, I consulted manymaterials and knew several stages of Chinese stock issue, international paperdepartment how to issue stock and the relative policy and system of stockmarket, then I asked my advisor how to comment on it and collected some commentsof experts on the website. Besides I logged in MARKET WATCH and bought severalstocks to do experiment to find out the conclusion that China it was moreperfect, so Chinese stock market needed to be improved.

　　Finance is very important in all fields and no other field can exist withbreaking away from finance, so the requirements for financer should be improvedin the future. Above all, in the future society, the requirement for financerwas higher than before, the talent only mastered profession will unfit thefuture society. Because in China there are limit resources for me and I amimpressed by your esteemed university, so I decided to go abroad for my futureeducation

　　Yours sincerely,

留学文书范文（第7篇）

　　Dear sir / madam:

　　I am a student, graduated from BaoYang middle school, Nanning, GuangXiautonomous region, in 20__. I am still studying in high school now, because Iwas not enrolled by the ideal university last year. Recently, I have a dream tostudy abroad. Then I search online and find that it is more convenient andsuitable for me to go to New Zealand for study.

　　First, New Zealand is a multicultural country, which has the most advancededucation in the world. Second, the tuition is lower than other countries’,which I think is mo

　　re reasonable for me. Finally, the climate of New Zealand is similar withthe climate of the South of China. Considering above reasons, I told my parentsmy plan on going to New Zealand for study, and my parent agreed with me.

　　As a girl, I like preschool education since I was young. Nowadays, Chineseparents, who want their children to get better education, pay more attention topreschool education. If I study specialized curriculums on preschool education,I will go back China and work hard on preschool education after leavingcollege.

　　My plan is as follows: first, I plan to study English in language institutefor about a half year in New Zealand. Then, I will study specialized curriculumson preschool education.

　　I believe I have the ability of study abroad, because I have finished allhigh school curriculums. Besides, my parents both have job and have rich income,so they will support me to finish my study. After finishing my study, I willreturn to my homeland and work on preschool education, so as to realize my lifevalue.

留学文书范文（第8篇）

　　Dead silence.

　　My left knee trembled uncontrollably. Why did no one speak? My hands beganto shake so I pulled them behind me-like one condemned. My eyes gauged thedistance to the door.

　　Then someone began to clap. More joined in. Tim looked into my eyes andsmiled. He smiled!

　　Joy, oh joy. My soul overflowed with rapture. I had done it! He noticed me!All the shame, all the worry, and all the castigation melted away in thatmoment. I knew how to make him love me. I simply had to speak better, singbetter, act better, and write better than anyone else. Determined, I joinedcompetitions, played in concerts, and wrote essays that were read in class. WhenTim transferred to the A.P. class, so did I. I threw myself into classdiscussions, attempting to dazzle him with my intelligence and intrepidity.Making friends with his friends, I dogged his steps.

　　The next summer Tim moved away. I never heard from him again. But thetransformation in me had taken place. Now I was involved for the simple pleasureof being involved. Challenging people surrounded me. Biff taught me to love.Dave taught me to laugh. Ramez taught me to break my limits. Alit gave meconfidence. Whenever I was in danger of reverting to a wallflower, one of my newfriends would drag me into another club or activity.

留学文书范文（第9篇）

　　1. 至少在一篇文书里，开自己的玩笑。

　　这是一种自嘲。这一方法应该在任何写作课和演讲课上教授。当我的女儿申请第一选择的大学时，我告诉她让她写一些与申请无关的东西，她当时写她的朋友给她的标签：自动点唱机。她可以轻易的辨别出一首歌，仅仅根据这首歌的前三个或四个音符。她告诉那所大学：“这个世界上对我来说最开心的地方就是在我自己弄得车里唱歌”。这是一种自嘲，你可以巧妙的提及到你已经写过的内容里面。如果你写了你在医院的志愿工作经历，描述你很笨拙的时刻。你是否有过把一位病人的尿样和他的苹果汁搞混。这些经历会告诉大学，你不仅仅在学业上很聪明，而且你很乐意探索这个世界。

　　2. 学会取舍文书内容。

　　焦虑会让你在文书中填充太多信息。招生官并不喜欢申请者罗列太多可以想到的课外活动，附上一份简历罗列经历会更糟糕。相反地，专注于三四个活动。如果你有两种不同的经历，譬如写作和导演，或是运行一场市议会的竞选和赢得国家烘焙大赛，这些才是你需要写进文书里面的。

　　3. 申请一所在你家人和朋友看来你能力之下，但是却拥有你喜欢的课外活动的学校。

　　许多学生和家长评价一所大学就像US News给大学排名一样：毕业率和留存率，声誉，教职工资源和其他一些学术方面的标准。但那些东西并不是能够决定你的大学生活是否珍贵。我的大学改变了我的一生，并不是因为学校很有声望的教授，而是学校有一份学生日报。在最后一刻申请一到两所有你喜欢的活动的学校。

　　4. 申请一所在你家人和朋友看来超过你能力的学校。

　　这一点看上去很奇怪，但是就算是全国声誉最高选拔最严格的大学，他们的招生方法都是最地区性的。你和你高中的其他同学的对比，对于他们很重要，是因为他们从每一所大学只招收几个学生。如果一所排名靠前的大学在这一年忽视了你其他同学的申请，那么请你申请这所大学。大学招生选拔是一项有风险的事业，你就像掷骰子一样。

　　5. 举办一次申请聚会。

　　我伊利诺伊州乡下的祖先有很多社区活动。他们有妇女聚在一起缝被的联谊会或是收获聚会。为什么不能有一场申请聚会呢？敞开你的大门，买一些披萨和苏打，邀请朋友们带着他们已经差不多完成的申请来交流。也许你不应该和申请同一所大学的'同学进行分享交流，因为竞争的本能会扭曲判断。但是相同年纪的人们在申请时会面临同样的挑战，他们能帮助你找到你文书中的问题。

留学文书范文（第10篇）

　　Dear Professor

　　I am a student， graduated from BaoYang middle school， Nanning， GuangXiautonomous region， in 20__. I am still studying in high school now， because Iwas not enrolled by the ideal university last year. Recently， I have a dream tostudy abroad. Then I search online and find that it is more convenient andsuitable for me to go to New Zealand for study.

　　First， New Zealand is a multicultural country， which has the most advancededucation in the world. Second， the tuition is lower than other countries’，which I think is mo

　　re reasonable for me. Finally， the climate of New Zealand is similar withthe climate of the South of China. Considering above reasons， I told my parentsmy plan on going to New Zealand for study， and my parent agreed with me.

　　As a girl， I like preschool education since I was young. Nowadays， Chineseparents， who want their children to get better education， pay more attention topreschool education. If I study specialized curriculums on preschool education，I will go back China and work hard on preschool education after leavingcollege.

　　My plan is as follows： first， I plan to study English in language institutefor about a half year in New Zealand. Then， I will study specialized curriculumson preschool education.

　　I believe I have the ability of study abroad， because I have finished allhigh school curriculums. Besides， my parents both have job and have rich income，so they will support me to finish my study. After finishing my study， I willreturn to my homeland and work on preschool education， so as to realize my lifevalue.

留学文书范文（第11篇）

　　美国留学推荐信在申请文书中有至关重要的作用

　　首先，我们看一下申请美国大学推荐信的重要性，推荐信一般是由第三方给申请者的评价和描述，可以说是比较客观的，其可信度较之其他的文书更有参考价值，因此推荐信在申请文书中的作用是非常关键的。

　　那么是不是申请美国大学推荐信都要写一些优点呢？如果通篇都在讲自己的优势，会让校方觉得不真实。那么如何在美国留学申请推荐信中巧妙加入自己的缺点并且加入的缺点又能为申请提供帮助呢？

　　申请美国大学推荐信写作策略之适当指出个人缺点：

　　一封推荐信如果阐述的完全是被推荐的同学的优点，不免让人觉得有粉饰之嫌，如果能恰当地加入一些缺点，不仅能令推荐信真实，还会通过似贬实褒，反而突出了被推荐人的特殊气质。例如计算机专业、数学专业乃至金融专业的同学，在推荐信中可以考虑加入这样的词句：该生有时因为过分专注于研究工作而难以平衡生活各方面的关系，这不失为一种美中不足。这句话似乎是在谈缺点，但很明显这样的缺点其实正是很多专业最渴望的缺点废寝忘食的工作态度，从而使得缺点也为申请提供了巨大帮助。

　　申请美国大学推荐信写作策略之缺点不要针对自己的专业：

　　可以考虑针对你的专业，不注重的地方，写一些缺点。比如你以后是要做研究的，你就不能说自己没耐心，不注意细节，或者以后你是要跟人打交道多的，你就不能说自己不善于和人相处，交流等等。推荐信里的缺点不要影响你所学专业，但是要看起来要真实一点，而且不能跟你其他部分写的有矛盾。

　　上述就是有关申请美国大学推荐信写作策略的简单介绍，总之，在推荐信中适当提及缺点是非常有必要的，但是这个缺点最好不要针对自己所学的专业。

留学文书范文（第12篇）

Dear x,

　　In additional to all my documents provided, I would like to take thisopportunity to write a personal statement to clarify the main reasons that driveme to study in x.

　　I was born in 1981, the starting period of China's economy reform designedand implemented under the leadership of Mr. De Xiaoping. I have witnessed thedramatic changes in the continuous infrastructure construction, observableimprovement of living standards, greater enrichment of social life, gradualderegulation of policies and strong growth of local economy. All the positivesides make everybody fond of the market economy, especially my parents, both ofwho are managers of property development companies. My parents have greatinfluence on me, so when I was young, I start to learn how to keep abreast ofthe modern society by learning the new knowledge and skills.

　　The world is already heading toward the new economy, although there arestill some turmoil in certain fields and period. The explosive informationtechnology changed the world in such quick and significant manners that manyeconomists can't explain well. Meanwhile, China is joining WTO, the economy atthis moment is growing at 8% annually, by further eliminating non-tariffbarriers and reduce tariff rates, China's market will experience huge structuralchanges and countless opportunities will emerge to make China the hottest spotin the world economy. As a Chinese student, I am living in a new age that Chinais in shortage of personnel with proficient English skills, overseas educationbackground and capability to merge east and west cultures.

　　By choosing to study in RMIT University in Melbourne Australia, there are afew advantages that I can achieve my goal:

　　Australia is a multicultural country, and RMIT university is a well-knownmulticultural university. I can learn how to interact within different culturesto improve my interpersonal skills. I also can build up a network that comprisesfriends from different countries and areas.

　　Australia enjoys vast land, abundant resources, mild weather andwell-managed security, it is the best destination to study.

　　Australia has the world class educational systems, and RMIT university iswell-know for its practical mission and provident objectives. By learning its ITcourses, I can become an IT professional recognised in Australia and China andother places as I will have obtained professional IT skills.

　　Australia has good relationship with China and Australia is also changingits old economy image by actively engaged into cooperation between APECcountries and regions. China is certainly the biggest potential market forAustralia. With my multicultual background and Australian experience and skills,when I have completed study in Australia and returns China, I can participateinto the development of business cooperation or any other relationship

　　In short, by choosing to study in RMIT University in Australia, I willbenefit greatly from the extraordinary experience for building up myprofessional career, and I will help to build China, my motherland, into awell-managed market economy country.

　　I look forward that my application can be assessed and approved at yourearliest convenience!

　　Yours sincerely,

　　xx

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留学文书范文（第13篇）

　　It has come to my attention that our nations， and nations like ours， havelong been plagued by a mysterious occurrence. An occurrence that is asperplexing as it is frustrating， and as baffling as it is widespread.

　　It has come to my attention that our nations， and nations like ours， havelong been plagued by a mysterious occurrence. An occurrence that is asperplexing as it is frustrating， and as baffling as it is widespread， a problemthat finds its origins at the very foot of our society. The problem of which Ispeak is none other than “The Orphan Sock Enigma，” the constant disappearance ofindividual socks during the laundering process. It is a problem familiar to allof us， and also one to which we have unwillingly admitted defeat.

　　I recently decided that this puzzle had remained unsolved for too long， andresolved to find an explanation. (In the grand tradition of science， I refusedto be discouraged by the basic irrelevance of my cause.) But the truth that Iuncovered is more shocking and fantastic than I could have ever imagined. Myprocedures， observations， and conclusions are as follows:

　　First， to verify that the problem exists， experimental and control loads oflaundry were completely processed (put through the washer and dryer). In thexperimental load (load with socks)， by the end of the process， some socks werelost. But in the control load (load without socks)， no socks were lost. Thus theproblem was verified.

　　Next the progress of a load of socks was carefully monitored. The resultsindicated that sock disappearance occurs during the period of time when the loadis in the dryer. Following this conclusion， a literature search was done and avery significant fact was uncovered: there is no mention of socks disappearingin dryers before the invention of dryers in the 1920s. All evidence clearlypointed to the dryer. And it is there that I would find the answer to theenigma.

　　Then， the actual experiment was done. In four separate trials， a number ofsocks (ten socks， or five pairs) were put through a normal drying cycle. Thetypes of socks tested were selected by the highly accurate Harvey-AllmanPrinciple Hierarchy and Zero Alternative Reduction Dimension.

留学文书范文（第14篇）

Dear x,

　　With the approach of new century, the developing China is requiring bettertrained and more highly educated men and women than ever before in history. Inorder to make more contributions to the society and, at the same time, satisfymy keen interest in science, I am looking forward to beginning my graduatestudy. I heard of Case Western Reserve University as early as when I was anundergraduate student. She is one of the most highly regarded universities inthe world and is an ideal place for ambitious youth.

　　I plan to study for Ph.D. in Biochemistry at Case Western ReserveUniversity with special interests in metabolism, macromolecular synthesis, andprotein crystal growth. I have had plentiful preparations. First, when being anundergraduate in the Department of Chemical Engineering at Tsinghua University,I got very extensive and intensive education. I took many courses on chemistryand the related subjects, and earned high scores for most of them. Second, mymajor, Polymer, can be put into good use in Biochemistry programs becausePolymer is closely related with biological Macromolecule. Third, I have workingexperience that enriches my theory and laboratory skills.

　　From 1990 to now, I have been engaged as an Assistant Engineer by theResearch institute, Beijing Yanshan Petrochemical Corporation (RIBYPC). In thefirst year, I was in charge of a 5-litre reactor for polymerization ofCarboxylated Butadiene-Styene Latex. Then I was transferred to another researchgroup to synthesize PET/PHB copolymer, a kin of polyester, which has theproperty of Liquid Crystal. I am the assistant head of the group. We can preparethe novel polymer with high molecule weight and excellent property in a 2-litrestainless steel reactor. During this monomers, with purity of more than 99.99%;this made my leader very satisfied.

　　More than four years of working experiences expand my capacity. I oftenmake use of NMR, X-ray, DSC and other instrumental methods for research. Amongthem, I am most skilled in NMR reactors, I have experiences on solving problemsof Engineering and Mechanics. What is more, I am familiar with computeroperation and some application software. The above information about myspecialty may be helpful for you to evaluate me.

　　It is said that the 21st century will be the age of Life Science. I hope toenter the esteemed Case Western Reserve University to face this challenge. I amconfident tat I shall be an excellent fellow. After completing my graduatestudy, I would like to return to my homeland and make use of my knowledge toserve the people.

　　By the way, I would like to give thanks to my parents. Being their oldestson, I am offered the most formal education and the deepest love. I never forgetthe 18-year’s life with them. Twelve years in the countryside and six years inShengli Oil Field bestowed me the character of diligence, resolution, andperseverance, as well as the deep love of nature and life. I am also indebted tomy dear wife. Without her never-ended encouragement and support in these years,I could not become closer and closer to the gate of the eminent Case WesternReserve University.

　　Knowing where is heading during navigation brings assured happiness. As astudent majoring in Biochemistry, I began my odyssey five years ago, when ourclass had a new biology teacher, who was young and energetic. He taught us in anentertaining way and communicated with us quite well. I liked him very much andwas impressed by the knowledge of Biological Sciences. He opened new doors tothe realm of Biology in my life. And with time being, I feel more and more sureabout my destination. Although the trail of navigation has not always beendefinitely straight, I believe it leads me to my dream.

　　Because of my excellent performance in the National Olympic MathematicsContest of High School Students in 1994 and my outstanding academic record insenior high school, I had the opportunity to be admitted to Peking University orTsinghua University, two most selective universities in China, waived of theAdmission Examination. But if I took the chance, I couldn’t select biologicalsciences as my major. So I gave up the precious chance and took the AdmissionExamination. I succeeded and was admitted by the Department of Biochemistry andMolecular Biology in Peking University, which ranks first in biological scienceeducation and research in China and has raised many scholars including membersof Chinese Academy of Sciences. In the first three years in university, mycurriculum has a broad range, covering both natural and humanity sciences, aswell as putting emphasis not only on biological sciences but also on closelyrelated courses. I have dedicated my energy to my study and have received acomplete, profound and strict training in biological sciences with the combinedstrength of individual and professors' help. Playing basketball is also a solidpart of my campus life. I am an active member in the basketball team of theCollege of Life Sciences in Peking University. As a point guard, the organizerof the team's attack, I have learned to make the five players to be a stronggroup in a game. Last year, we ranked the third in Peking University Cup amongthe thirty-six teams. This experience endows me a strong sense ofresponsibility, confidence and team-working spirit.

　　To be a successful scientific researcher requires not only academicpotential but also independent research ability. A student will developcapability for independent research by working closely with a scholar. For thisreason, I entered the National Laboratory of Protein Engineering and PlantGenetic Engineering and participated the Group of Protein Structure andFunction. Now I cooperate with two graduate students, one of whom will go to theHarvard Medical School to continue his research work. Our ultimate goal is todevelop a new thrombolysis drug, which is supported by the National 863 Hi-TechPlanning. (Please check Research Experience for detail.) By the three monthshere, I have been able to do many experiments independently and have obtainedserious attitude and cooperation in scientific work.

　　I have a sublime dream to be one equipped with exceptional experimentskills in addition to advanced scientific and technological knowledge. In mymind Pennsylvania State University is an ideal place to purse the graduatestudy, which is intellectually exhilarating and challenging. I respect yourrigorous scientific approach, original idea and outstanding achievements. I ameager to join a group in which I can make the best use of my capabilities andcombine my personal intelligence with group cooperation to full-fill the group’sbenefit as well as to make my dream come true. The Department of Pharmacology isdefinitely this type. With the fast development in the field of life sciences,human is getting more and more interested in probing into the nature of lifeitself and every great achievement in the study of life is sure to put light toour understanding of ourselves and to benefit our people and society as a whole.The field of Pharmacology has particular importance to serve man’s purposeabove. A scientist of Pharmacology is not only a researcher, but also thecreator of the future world. I think the challenging Pharmacology is the mostsuitable field for me to begin my graduate study, which is more than acontinuation of undergraduate study and is of not only a matter of greaterknowledge. The aim of it is to prepare students to enter a profession in whichthe knowledge is put into daily use. I am interested in the field of signalpathway in tumor formation. Several professors' research impressed me, includingDr. Mulder and some other professors. After obtaining my Ph.D., I plan to doresearch work in an institution either domestically or overseas. I believe thatsuch a position provides the largest room in which I can make the mostenthusiastic dedication to the world of sciences.

　　I believe the advanced courses, distinguished faculty and the best-equippedlaboratories of your group will help me make the desired achievements. With theconviction that I can sustain me through the intense graduate study, I have madethe decision to apply for Pennsylvania State University and hope your seriousconsideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　xxx

留学文书范文（第15篇）

Dear xx,

　　My motivation to study Accounting /Information Business at degree leveldevelops from my enjoyment from the single Business Studies at AS, currentlyconverted into a double award at A2. For me, Business Studies has proved to be afascinating subject, one that offers unlimited professional opportunities. Mycoursework case studies of both Norwich Union and Zenith Conservatories havegiven me an insight into complexities involved in operating such variedbusinesses, which I have found most intriguing, particularly those which relateto any financial considerations. Studying these business subjects at degreelevel will allow me to explore, in depth, a range of stimulating andinterdisciplinary topics which I feel will give me a broader understandingtowards the theories and practices of management in different organizations inrelation to a Financial/Information environment

　　At school, I have participated in many fund raising events, open days andfurther education fairs. I regularly collect for Save the Children charity andhave subsequently become a member. Extra-curricular activities have incorporateddrama productions of Grease, the promotion of the School production of West SideStory as part of my Marketing unit and a heavy involvement in the preparationand publishing of our year 11 yearbook. These were demanding tasks, whichincluded budgeting our costs and materials to keep within a specific pricelimit. Although it was tough, I found it extremely satisfying, especially afterseeing the final results. My AS Business course has given me an understanding oforganizations as a whole, but experiences such as working on the Year book andduties in my part time job has allowed me to expand my knowledge andconsciousness of such financial topics. My ICT skills have developed highlythrough doing Vocational A levels, which I feel is invaluable in the Businessfield. The main thing I have learnt is that for all businesses, financialmatters are imperative; it is the core of any organization and beingknowledgeable in such issues attracts me

　　My communication skills have been enhanced through my part time employmentwith River Island. My promotion to weekend footwear manager is developingknowledge of financial record keeping, problem solving, meeting weekly salestargets and teamwork awareness, which I feel can be used and put into practicewhilst studying my preferred degree course

　　From the age of seven I attended a Bury St Edmunds Gymnastics club andcompeted at County, Regional and National levels. The feeling that I got when Iplayed a role within the team to gain the gold medal was amazing, equal to thefeeling when I achieved an individual gold medal as the top National aroundcompetitor. The realization of how important managing school work with a hobbywhich was not only physically demanding, but emotionally challenging has givenme a understanding of how to be realistic, a skill which is valuable whenplanning certain business strategies

　　I believe that during my sixth form studies I have grown in both confidenceand maturity, preparing me for the opportunity to study at university. My choiceof AS and A levels, along with other academic and personal achievements havehelped to consolidate and support my desire to study Business at degree level. Ibelieve that I will be fully committed to successfully completing Accountancy/Information Business related degree and relish in any opportunities which aregiven to help me achieve my aspirations in a business related career.

　　Yours sincerely,

留学文书范文（第16篇）

　　随着当前出国留学越来越理性，越来越多的国内学生从高一甚至初中就开始着手进行托福考试、美国高考SAT以及课外活动的准备。经过初三、高一以及高二三年的准备，可以说国内申请人的SAT成绩、托福成绩、GPA（平均成绩）以及课外活动基本已经成形，Essay写作相当于将这些成绩和所做过的活动结合起来，透过Essay予以呈现，这也是大学对学生初步认识和考察的依据。简而言之，就是把所有的菜料都准备齐全了，炒出什么样的菜，靠的就是Essay了。

　　Essay是学生向美国大学展示自我个性与风采的重要申请材料。但是，很多中国学生并不明确如何撰写符合美国大学审查标准的Essay。由于美国大学的入学体制不同于中国大学，完全以高考成绩来决定成败、选择学生。美国的大学，尤其是常春藤联盟名校等一流的大学更加注重学生的个性与特质。对于一个普通的高中生，在没有取得巨大成功或者成就的情况下，是否具有未来成功的潜力是美国名校最看重的。因此，SAT满分的学生或GPA成绩非常高的学生，不一定能进入理想的学校，而许多成绩不是非常优异的学生却能够进入一流名校。这就是美国大学选择学生的特色。如何写出一篇把自己个人特色、优势表达得非常出色、非常到位的Essay，就扮演了举足轻重的角色。

　　据悉，美国高校的入学审查官平均花在一个学生Essay自传上的时间是5分钟。如何通过Essay的开头，能够让Essay的审查官很清晰明了地看到申请人过去三年的经历与想法，并且有兴趣进一步深入了解这个学生，是很重要的。但是，Essay必须根据学生三年来经历的事实进行撰写，绝不可以凭空假造。这种Essay的表达，看似容易，其实是很复杂的，因为每个学校的要求并不是整齐划一的，没有一个共同的标准，在挑选国际留学生时每所高校会有自己的偏好。因此，学生在进行Essay写作时，一定要在围绕、突现自身亮点、特质的基础上也要综合考虑所申请大学的“口味”，这样才会让自己在美国名校申请的激烈竞争中脱颖而出。

留学文书范文（第17篇）

Dear xxx,

　　An experienced engineer of security printing with China’s Central Bank, Inow would like to scale higher intellectual heights by pursuing Ph. D. studiesin mechanical engineering at your university. I believe that my strongbackground in CAD has adequately prepared me to embark on this endeavor.

　　I have been working since 1996 for the People’s Bank of China, a Chineseversion of the Federal Reserve, at its unique research institute of securityprinting, with the responsibility of designing the Chinese currency and themachinery to produce it. By engaging me in a variety of projects, the jobafforded me ample exposure to cutting-edge developments in computertechnologies, particularly in CAD software. I have, for example, recentlyredeveloped a purchased CAD (Computer Aided Design) software to make it moresuitable for our own purposes. By adding our own part/subassembly to thedatabase and make our own drawing criteria, we have achieved dramatically betterefficiency.

　　My job performance, which has won me professional respect from all of mycolleagues, was achieved thanks to the strong background I acquired as a studentin computer science. My undergraduate GPA ranked first among the 63 students ofclassmates in mechanical department, for which I was awarded first-class andsecond-class prizes many times. My graduate GPA ranked among the top 4% of the105 students in my year, which won me the “San Hao” scholarship every yearduring the three years of my graduate studies.

　　Unlike many other Chinese students, who are content with performing well inexams, I made a point of learning through my own hands-on experiences. In theMaster’s program at the Beijing Institute of Printing, I gained an in-depthunderstanding of artificial intelligence, including expert system and geneticalgorithm, especially in neural network. For my thesis, I programmed amulti-level BP neural network with C language to analyze my mathematical model,and applied much of my knowledge in optimization. I thus became able to programwith a host of different computer languages, especially C++, with which I helpedmy graduate advisor to design a paper-cutting machine. To analyze the mechanismstatically and dynamically, I programmed a software system to analyze andemulate it on screen. In undergraduate studies, I had often programmed withFortran77 and the Basic language.

　　Upon the completion of my Master’s studies, I easily passed the doctoralrecord examination in CAD/CAM of Beijing University, one f the top universitiesin China. But I gave up the opportunity in order to gain more practicalexperience in the industry. The decision proved to be right, as it guaranteed mebetter access to sophisticated facilities, such as state-of-the-art personalcomputers. With the People’s Bank of China, I have thus accumulated solidexpertise in many kinds of operating and application software systems,particularly in CAD. I now have a firm grip on the latest developments incomputer science in China.

　　The challenges I met and the successes I achieved at the People’s Bank havenot only endowed me with confidence but also fired off my desire to furtherimprove myself. I have enjoyed high-quality and efficient production with theuse of a kind of PC-based CAD software, MDT, developed by Autodesk Corporation.I now have a dream: some day, every person can design his favorite product withsome sort of CAD software, and then search for an ideal factory over high-speedinternet its production; and the factory will put specifications of the product,as it has received them via the high-speed internet into its CIMS, and out popsthe product, as designed, at the end of the factory’s production line. It is abeautiful dream for every engineer, but many difficulties the speed ofdata-transfer and how to manage the product data among CAD, CAM, CAPP and CAEsystems. These questions are fascinating, and I would like to come up with myown answers to them.

　　To prepare myself for advanced studies in your country, I have persisted inimproving my English proficiency. As demonstrated by my score of 700 (96%) inthe verbal section of GRE, I now have an adequate command of English forundertaking graduate studies in your program.

　　After carefully comparing the strengths of many universities, I find MercyUniversity particularly suited for my purpose. It has got the best combinationof quality faculty, many state-of-the-art facilities, and an intriguing academicenvironment. Currently, China still lags significantly behind Western countriesin mechanical engineering. I hope that, with a few years of graduate studiesunder your seasoned guidance, I will be able to return to my motherland and helpbring mechanical engineering in my country to international standards.

　　Although my ultimate objective is a Ph. D. degree, I am willing to do aMaster’s degree if necessary. In either case, I would like to concentrate mystudies in one or a combination of the following areas: CAD, CAM, CIMS, Computergraphics, Mechanical design, Mechanical manufacturing, Optimization, Artificialintelligence, and Robotics. Your favorable evaluation of my application will behighly appreciated.

　　Yours,

　　xxx

留学文书范文（第18篇）

Dear xx,

　　I always believe that the opportunities only dawned on those with fullpreparations. On Nov. 17 this year, I participated in the selective trial of theregistered accountants held by China Registered Accountant Association, in whichI ranked to the top in the examinations and will be sent to practise in the biginternational accounting company in foreign country. It is a very competitivetrial with over 150 excellent students majoring in accounting as theparticipators, including those in xx University and xx University. When myfriend asked me how I prepared for this contest and got such a good score, Itold them that the only thing I did was to keep a smooth heart and fullconfidence towards the precipitate contest. Actually, for years, I have neverstopped making preparations by learning carefully and diligently for the comingof the contest.

　　Two years ago when I first entered our university, I was selected into thebest class in our school for my outstanding score. This class consists of 150excellent students out of 3000 freshmen that year with the best professors(Including the president of the school, department dean and the doyen professorson every subject) teaching us. Therefore, my view was largely broadened in thenutritious studying atmosphere, where I was deeply influenced by theirresearching experience and personal charms as well as learning abundantprofessional knowledge and cultivating my unique ideas. Besides, many of mylearning habits and thinking styles came from the study there. Meanwhilehowever, I also shouldered heavy pressure because we must be the best in such aclass under the attention of all the teachers and students in the school.Therefore, I tried to do everything perfectly without missing any small problem.At the end of last year, I happened to find the suggestion collection paper forthe “Asset Decrease Accounting Standard” on the website, which was quitedifferent from what I learnt in books. Cherishing the aroused interest, I spentover one month in learning this standard carefully by reading large amount offiles and discussing with my teacher for the cognition of the developingprocess, problems and influence to the registered companies of the AssetDecrease Calculation. Finally, I published my article on the core magazine of“Finance and Accounting”. Besides, I am a girl who liked challenges. Oncompleting my study in the three years, I accepted many challenges without anyhesitation. I could get much pleasure when racing with time because I believethat the valuable use of every minute means the success. Therefore, I was veryexcited to be able to enter the graduate school one year earlier than otherstudents in class taking advantage of my insistent efforts to learn twice asmuch knowledge as them. Meanwhile, I am very proud that I got the firstscholarship in my sophomore year for my excellent score.

　　In spite of the limited spare time with 5-6 hours on my daily courses, Iactively found many opportunities to do the extracurricular work. For example, Iasked my teacher for assisting him with his subject and helping him to summarizethe files because I am always trying to form my own points by summarizing theknowledge I learnt. I think that study is an active action, which required me tofind some opportunities to improve myself independently. Taking advantage of myexcellent behavior, I was finally admitted by the professors and participated inthe xx Social and Scientific Layout Project: “Research on the AccountingInformation Transmission Mechanism based on the Company Management” by Professorxx, in which I was mainly responsible for the Comparison of the StatisticsInformation Transmission Mechanism among the main countries in the world as theassistant of Professor xxx Through the collection and summarization of thehundreds of files, I further improved reading ability from over ten pages of theChinese files per hour at the beginning to large amount of English files as wellas picking up some useful information per hour. Therefore, my abilities in theinformation seeking and estimation were largely improved.

　　My campus life is rich and colorful. As the vice president of theStudents’Union, who was mainly responsible for the work of Science andTechnology Association, I must organize some meaningful extracurricularactivities for students with the other members of the Students’ Union like thedebates and speech contests etc. In this process, my leadership, organizing andteam managing abilities were largely improved. In addition, I was also involvedin the work of External Relations Department, which was very difficult andcomplicated because this department is just similar to the Public RelationDepartment in the company. It was established mainly to connect with the leadersof the corporations for the fund to our campus activities. It was just theparticular work in this department that presented me with a strong communicatingability. Generally, I think that my participation and organization of theseextracurricular activities has improved my comprehensive ability, which is veryhelpful for my future study.